季节,
轻轻地飘落
就象这段心事
风,燃烧
你的面孔
清晰又模糊
爱上你
不是我的本意
却是我的无奈
我逃不开
可否
就让我在你生命里停留?
- Re: 在你生命里停留posted on 05/14/2004
你的诗颇似一小场轻快的舞蹈,传递着莫名的情趣和感伤,是不是jazz 听得太多?我对jazz也有特殊的偏好。
请问snowbaby, 在读谁的诗集?
- Re: 在你生命里停留posted on 05/14/2004
My God, I never read poem, shame on myself for your question :)
Thanks for enjoying my words, those are something directly from heart but not writing skill, just like what Julie Roberts said in "Notting Hill", 'this is just a girl standing in front of a boy, to ask for love' .... I am talking to my soul, and thanks for Maya to provide me a place to lay them down. - Re: 在你生命里停留posted on 05/14/2004
我觉得你这首诗的前三段真是我内心的写照。:) 可是最后一段,似是一种浪漫的归宿,其实最后都不太浪漫了。记得就在这儿看过一篇文章(我一下找不着。谁知道提个醒儿。),说爱他,就不要在一起,距离才会产生美,好让他永远想着你。
深夜里他酣睡,我却圆睁着双眼看黑暗。我总想,如果我不是这么触手可及,他也许仍会渴望我。:)
我逃不开
可否
让我在你生命里稍做停留?
你我的四季
循环依旧
可是你我
都将是彼此相簿里最意斓珊的回首 - Re: 在你生命里停留posted on 10/22/2004
those are something directly from heart but not writing skill, just >like what Julie Roberts said in "Notting Hill", 'this is just a girl >standing in front of a boy, to ask for love'
Dear,
Can I share My love with you? Directly from my heart and my soul.
Ko ko
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