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  鍦ㄤ綘鐢熷懡閲屽仠鐣�

  Snowbaby posted on 05/14/2004
  
  季节，
  轻轻地飘落
  就象这段心事
  
  风，燃烧
  你的面孔
  清晰又模糊
  
  爱上你
  不是我的本意
  却是我的无奈
  
  我逃不开
  可否
  就让我在你生命里停留？
  

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  Re: 鍦ㄤ綘鐢熷懡閲屽仠鐣�
  #1 鏃犲奖 posted on 05/14/2004
  
  
  你的诗颇似一小场轻快的舞蹈，传递着莫名的情趣和感伤,是不是jazz 听得太多？我对jazz也有特殊的偏好。
  
  请问snowbaby, 在读谁的诗集？
  
  
  
  
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  Re: 鍦ㄤ綘鐢熷懡閲屽仠鐣�
  #2 Snowbaby posted on 05/15/2004
  
  
  My God, I never read poem, shame on myself for your question :)
  
  Thanks for enjoying my words, those are something directly from heart but not writing skill, just like what Julie Roberts said in "Notting Hill", 'this is just a girl standing in front of a boy, to ask for love' .... I am talking to my soul, and thanks for Maya to provide me a place to lay them down.
  
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  Re: 鍦ㄤ綘鐢熷懡閲屽仠鐣�
  #3 寰�寰�鐢扮敯 posted on 05/15/2004
  
  
  我觉得你这首诗的前三段真是我内心的写照。：) 可是最后一段，似是一种浪漫的归宿，其实最后都不太浪漫了。记得就在这儿看过一篇文章(我一下找不着。谁知道提个醒儿。)，说爱他，就不要在一起，距离才会产生美，好让他永远想着你。
  
  深夜里他酣睡，我却圆睁着双眼看黑暗。我总想，如果我不是这么触手可及，他也许仍会渴望我。：)
  
  我逃不开
  可否
  让我在你生命里稍做停留？
  
  你我的四季
  循环依旧
  可是你我
  都将是彼此相簿里最意斓珊的回首
  
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  Re: 鍦ㄤ綘鐢熷懡閲屽仠鐣�
  #4 Ryiap posted on 10/22/2004
  
  
  those are something directly from heart but not writing skill, just >like what Julie Roberts said in "Notting Hill", 'this is just a girl >standing in front of a boy, to ask for love'
  

  
  Dear,
  Can I share My love with you? Directly from my heart and my soul.
  Ko ko
  

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