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  鑽夊師涓�

  adagio posted on 08/29/2005
  草原上月色如洗
  月光掠夺了青草的芬芳
  侵蚀了夕照的温暖
  
  遥远的河流
  漂着老者裹着白袍的尸身
  月色无垠
  寂静的死亡无垠
  
  一匹白色的小马驹
  在恐惧中惊醒，惶顾天野
  他凝望一片洁白的浮云
  像一匹受伤的小母马
  对她一见钟情
  
  白马重返睡乡，风吹散了白云
  （她留在了白马的梦里）
  冰冷的月亮一如永恒
  却被这瞬间的爱情魅惑
  现出一个嫩黄的光晕
  
  月色无垠
  寂静的夜无垠
  草原上梦境无垠
  
  2005．8．28
  
  

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  Re: 鑽夊師涓�
  #1 鍏�鍗佷竴瀛� posted on 08/29/2005
  
  
  天地和时间都凌冻了，高天上又有一息尚存。这首的意境十分好。
  
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  Re: 鑽夊師涓�
  #2 adagio posted on 08/29/2005
  
  
  最近对死亡有点了悟（家中刚有年老亲友过世），死亡，生，爱情，梦幻 。。。
  
  只愿在死的笼罩下（现实）还有爱的一些光芒（梦想）。How to transcend from a meaningless and chaotic reality to a dream of order and meaning, this is poet's task, as demonstrated by Wallace Stevens.
  
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  Re: 鑽夊師涓�
  #3 xw posted on 08/29/2005
  
  
  this is a good piece, pure and touching...
  
  

  只愿在死的笼罩下（现实）还有爱的一些光芒（梦想）。How to transcend from a meaningless and chaotic reality to a dream of order and meaning, this is poet's task, as demonstrated by Wallace Stevens.
  

  
  This is so-called 'creation', always a poet's task.
  
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  Re: 鑽夊師涓�
  #4 鍏�鍗佷竴瀛� posted on 08/30/2005
  
  
  宗教意味很足。画面有些怪诞。Dali?
  
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  Re: 鑽夊師涓�
  #5 adagio posted on 08/31/2005
  
  
  religious? come on! weird? maybe. Dali? No way! I don't even like him.
  
  the poem is a frustrating feeling of looking for meaning in the permeating presence of death and nihility, it failed to deliver this message I guess. :)
  
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  Re: 鑽夊師涓�
  #6 璇楀弸 posted on 12/11/2007
  
  
  好诗.
  
  白马非马, 梦已非梦.
  
  
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  Re: 鑽夊師涓�
  #7 浜岃�佹澘 posted on 12/11/2007
  
  
  
  好美好清冷的境地，不合让女子久留。
  
  

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