Poetic Forms: The Ballad

by Conrad Geller

Traditional poetic forms have had a bad time of it since Walt Whitman set off the free verse revolution about a hundred and fifty years ago. Critics and teachers have learned to sniff at rhyme and rhythm in contemporary poetry as "doggerel," or, worst epithet of all, "greeting-card verse." Too many young poets, mistakenly seizing on the idea that free verse is an art without rules, have been encouraged to reject any form as an encumbrance to the pristine expression of their feelings.

Yet the best poets of modern times -- Robert Frost, Richard Wilbur, Dylan Thomas among them -- never abandoned the poetic traditions of English verse. Some of their best work is strictly traditional, and when they turned to the demanding discipline of free verse, they did so with the advantages of a thorough apprenticeship in their craft.

If you are a developing poet you, too, might be well advised to look at traditional forms. Even if you end up with free verse, as most contemporary poets do, your time spent playing with the forms of poetry will be a grounding in the discipline of language, which, after all, is the raw material of all poetry: "The right words in the right order."

The oldest, in some ways the easiest, and surely the most enduring of all poetic forms is the ballad. Ballads, the main vehicle for stories and songs, go back into the mists of prehistory, before English was even recognizably English:


In Scarlet Town, where I was born,
There was a fair maid dwellin'
Made every lad cry wellaway,
And her name was Barbara Allen.

Nearly as well known is the tale of Sally Brown, who tricked a serial killer into an unguarded moment, enabling her to push him off a cliff into the sea:

"Lie there, lie there, you false young man,
Lie there, lie there," said she.
"Six little maidens you've drownded here,
Go keep them company!"

As these old examples show, the traditional ballad stanza has four lines, alternating between four iambic beats (da-DUM, da-DUM, da-DUM, da-DUM), and three beats (da-DUM, da-DUM, da-DUM) per line. The second and fourth lines rhyme. (In older English, "Allen" was pronounced "Ellen," so the second and fourth lines of the first example would have rhymed for the original singers.) This form, four beats and three, by the way, harks back to the seven-beat line in which the earliest heroic tales like Beowulf (about 750 AD) were composed.
Ballads appear all through English literature. Most famous is S. T. Coleridge's The Ancient Mariner:


It is an ancient Mariner,
And he stoppeth one of three.
"By thy long gray beard and glittering eye,
Now wherefore stopp'st thou me?"

Coleridge, of course, like most poets, uses the basic form only as a framework. Sometimes he expands the stanza to six lines or more:

An orphan's curse would drag to hell
A spirit from on high;
But oh! more horrible than that
Is the curse in a dead man's eye!
Seven days, seven nights, I saw that curse,
And yet I could not die.

Sometimes he uses internal rhyme in the odd-numbered lines:

The fair breeze blew, the white foam flew,
The furrow followed free:
We were the first that ever burst
Into that silent sea.

Oscar Wilde, in The Ballad of Reading Gaol, about a murderer waiting for execution, skillfully makes the six-line stanza his standard:

And all men kill the thing they love,
By all let this be heard
Some do it with a bitter look,
Some with a flattering word,
The coward does it with a kiss,
The brave man with a sword!

Probably no writer used the six-line adaptation of the ballad form more vigorously or delightfully than Lewis Carroll in The Walrus and the Carpenter:

The sun was shining on the sea,
Shining with all his might:
He did his very best to make
The billows smooth and bright--
And this was odd, because it was
The middle of the night.

Can you do as well? With practice, you can make this four or six-line form a powerful vehicle for your poetry. If you have a story to tell, especially if it's a gruesome or funny one, you might try the ballad as your form. You are likely to find, to your pleasure and surprise, it gives just the tone you need.

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I should add Bob Dylan's Ballad of Hollis Brown, it's quite
sad though.

Ballad of Hollis Brown

Hollis Brown
He lived on the outside of town
Hollis Brown
He lived on the outside of town
With his wife and five children
And his cabin fallin' down

You looked for work and money
And you walked a rugged mile
You looked for work and money
And you walked a rugged mile
Your children are so hungry
That they don't know how to smile

Your baby's eyes look crazy
They're a-tuggin' at your sleeve
Your baby's eyes look crazy
They're a-tuggin' at your sleeve
You walk the floor and wonder why
With every breath you breathe

The rats have got your flour
Bad blood it got your mare
The rats have got your flour
Bad blood it got your mare
If there's anyone that knows
Is there anyone that cares?

You prayed to the Lord above
Oh please send you a friend
You prayed to the Lord above
Oh please send you a friend
Your empty pockets tell yuh
That you ain't a-got no friend

Your babies are crying louder
It's pounding on your brain
Your babies are crying louder
It's pounding on your brain
Your wife's screams are stabbin' you
Like the dirty drivin' rain

Your grass it is turning black
There's no water in your well
Your grass is turning black
There's no water in your well
You spent your last lone dollar
On seven shotgun shells

Way out in the wilderness
A cold coyote calls
Way out in the wilderness
A cold coyote calls
Your eyes fix on the shotgun
That's hangin' on the wall

Your brain is a-bleedin'
And your legs can't seem to stand
Your brain is a-bleedin'
And your legs can't seem to stand
Your eyes fix on the shotgun
That you're holdin' in your hand

There's seven breezes a-blowin'
All around the cabin door
There's seven breezes a-blowin'
All around the cabin door
Seven shots ring out
Like the ocean's pounding roar

There's seven people dead
On a South Dakota farm
There's seven people dead
On a South Dakota farm
Somewhere in the distance
There's seven new people born

Gotta listen to it with his singing voice, harmonica/guitar.