狮子
我不会咬断你的脖子,暴露出我的兽性
是你的叫声正在让我一点点地忘记,我庞大的身躯
我的祖先,和兄弟
我甚至相信我足够地轻盈,飞得上枝头
能脱掉爪牙,生出歌喉
然而我金灿灿的毛发,艳过了这一季的鸟群
引来众多的猎枪
这种时候我想知道,你还在好好地奔跑着,还在某个森林
迷恋童话,相信一头狮子有过的温情
- Re: 我也灌水,《狮子》posted on 05/04/2008
真是一首优美的诗歌。I love it.
如此直白 - 出自笨笨之手让人难以置信。特别是笨笨过去教过我们她是如何肆无忌惮地窜用“你”“我”二字的 - 考虑到这一因素后,温情更显清晰和透彻。:) - Re: 我也灌水,《狮子》posted on 05/04/2008
这个"我"是第一个我吧?
"这时候"相信一切曾经的illusion.
笨笨 wrote:
狮子
迷恋童话,相信一头狮子有过的温情
- Re: 我也灌水,《狮子》posted on 05/04/2008
笨笨的这首诗我也喜欢,至少看的懂。
- Re: 我也灌水,《狮子》posted on 05/04/2008
笨笨很少直接用"温情"这类的词,有点怕怕直接的理解?要导读.
读后就想到Henri Rousseau 的画
July wrote:
笨笨的这首诗我也喜欢,至少看的懂。 - Re: 我也灌水,《狮子》posted on 05/05/2008
谢谢朋友们读。喜欢草叶转的这些画。 - Re: 《狮子》posted on 05/05/2008
很喜欢!
艳过了这一季的鸟群!
这样的句子很笨笨。 - Re: 《狮子》posted on 05/05/2008
xiaoman wrote:
很喜欢!
艳过了这一季的鸟群!
这样的句子很笨笨。
也喜欢。不过唯一一个somehow读时疙瘩了一下的字也在这句里:那个“了”字。去掉更干净利落。 - Re: 《狮子》posted on 05/05/2008
笨笨,
读后感:
"你"瞥到一瞬间,也长久定格在这一瞬间,
"我"的悲剧则是"你"的童话般的真实, or
我"梦寐则是"你"的童话般的真实
Henri Rossaeus的画是:丛林和野兽, 梦想和自然法则.
- posted on 05/05/2008
Rocky: The best working lion in the business!
Thursday April 24,2008
By Padraic Flanagan A tame lion suddenly went berserk and mauled one of its handlers to death in the middle of rehearsals for a film.
The lion, most recently seen wrestling actor Will Ferrell’s character in the film Semi-Pro, clamped its massive jaws around trainer Stephan Miller’s neck.
Then the lion, named Rocky, sank its enormous teeth into 39-year-old Miller as two other handlers struggled to force it to let go.
The desperate trainers finally used pepper spray to subdue Rocky – but by then Miller was already slumped on the ground dead.
Rocky, an imposing seven feet tall and weighing 700lb, ran amok at the Predators in Action wild animal training centre in the San Bernardino Mountains, about 100 miles north-east of Los Angeles.
Other trainers were mystified by the attack because Rocky was considered docile and had always obediently followed cues until then. Animal welfare officials will now decide his fate.
- Re: 《狮子》posted on 05/07/2008
喜欢~ - Re: 《狮子》posted on 05/07/2008
韵律,自然而成的韵律是一种功力 - Re: 《狮子》posted on 05/08/2008
问好视角,古典。 - posted on 05/20/2008
Lion
I will not bite and break your neck, exposing my beastly nature
It is your call that's making me forget, little by little, my massive body
And my ancestors, and my brothers
I even imagine I am elegant enough, to fly over the treetop
Discard my paws, and grow a singing voice
Yet my golden hair, more fiery than a whole season of birds
Attracts crowds of hunting rifles
At times like this, I want to know, that you still run free, in some forest
Enchanted by fairy tales, believing in the once tenderness of a lion
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