- 玛雅：
“失去我，你就失去你的思想。”这个汉语是谁译的？不是杨武能，李魁贤没有译过，此句的错误同绿原一样，但整诗却不是绿译本:-(
Dasha聊附英译一种罢：
What will Thou do, God, when I die?
I am Thy jug (what if I am smashed?)
I am Thy drink (what if I spoil?)
I am Thy garment and Thy trade
losing me Though losest Thy meaning
after my death Thou hast no house wherein
words near and warm greet thee
from Thy tired feet falls
the velvet sandal that I am
Thy great mantle lets go of Thee
Thy glance, which I with my cheek
now warmly receive as with a pillow
will come, and will seek me, long...
and will lie down at sunset...
in the lap of unresponding, strangge rocks
What wilt Thou do, God? I am fearful.
http://www2b.abc.net.au/science/k2/stn-old/archive2001/posts/June/topic331337.shtm （好译文，可惜此网页已不复存在）
Dasha
