- 译得很美妙。祝贺。唯一感觉有点小遗憾的是，原文中的‘ocean' 是主体，the ocean knows this, 气魄很大，一切都在她的包容之中演绎。译诗中的‘海洋’被处理成了客体，‘答案藏在海底’，有点儿‘事不关己’。是否可作‘大海知道谜底’？乱评了啊，莫怪。
WOA wrote:
Enigmas --By Pablo Neruda
奥秘
--巴勃罗.聂鲁达
You've asked me what the lobster is weaving there
with his golden feet?
I reply, the ocean knows this.
You say, what is the ascidia waiting for in its transparent bell?
What is it waiting for?
I tell you it is waiting for time, like you.
你曾问, 那龙虾金黄色的脚
究竟在挥舞什么?
我说, 答案就藏在海底
你又问, 那晶莹贝囊里的海蛸
究竟等候着什么？
我告诉你，它在期待光阴
一如同样期待的你
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