- xiaoman wrote:
谢谢悟空，我对英文一点信心没有。
上次借了朋友的纪录片来看，被他逼着写作业，还说不能欠过年，昨晚硬着头皮写了一个。大家多多包涵和指点。
谢谢八爷，收到你的信，我都改过来了。：）））
表扬完了，下面是批评。:-) 仔细看看，也并非没有可改进增色之处。但这些属于白璧微瑕，不影响理解。
provokative => provocative
his one friend’s wife => wife of a friend of his (or: wife of one of his friends)
visiting her => visiting with her
so was she him => so was she by him
poet’s life => the poet's life
likeened => likened
with brightness => with the brightness.
found himself agrees to => found himself agreeable to
Hope you don't mind me pointing them out. :-)
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