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> 闃垮 wrote: >>adagio wrote: >>An Shan, I can tell from this piece your language is getting more mature but you have to know how to tell a story - to cut the unnecessary stuff and only to keep the essential, to make the story more condensed and more dramatic, thus it ca...
用两个手指一起，可以上下滑动文本编辑区。