《别处》
每到天气适宜,她就在内部囤积雨水
虽然草原在别处,牛羊也在别处
那只肥云朵,吃下太多的冷空气,只剩
一个方向;春风又向前翻滚了一千里
扬起牧羊女的鞭子,和那个反复挥别的人
辗转的马蹄声
她摆起腰肢,不停地捕捉自身的弧度
眼中有急于自拔的迷雾
3/20/2009
- Re: 《别处》posted on 03/27/2009
跑马遛遛的山上,一朵遛遛的云哟。
这个云孤单也单薄了点。
Every tree needs a friend, every cloud too.
- Re: 《别处》posted on 03/27/2009
"眼中有急于自拔的迷雾"
笨笨,
I feel blue today, reading your poem makes me flood out
the rain:-( - Re: 《别处》posted on 03/27/2009
Me too, I have been sooo blue these days, what's wrong with me? Dr. Caoye?
草叶 wrote:
"眼中有急于自拔的迷雾"
笨笨,
I feel blue today, reading your poem makes me flood out
the rain:-( - Re: 《别处》posted on 03/27/2009
July,
Big hug, we should cry together. I don't know what else to do?
Reading happy poems or quit reading poems, especially海子poems.
July wrote:
Me too, I have been sooo blue these days, what's wrong with me? Dr. Caoye?
- Re: 《别处》posted on 03/27/2009
春风又向前翻滚了一千里
扬起牧羊女的鞭子,和那个反复挥别的人
辗转的马蹄声
很喜欢这首,尤其那句,春风又向前翻滚了一千里~多么潇洒!多么春风得意。
- Re: 《别处》posted on 03/27/2009
lspk wrote:
跑马遛遛的山上,一朵遛遛的云哟。
好美啊。
这个云孤单也单薄了点。
Every tree needs a friend, every cloud too.
我写第一段时,脑中第一个意象是草。有谁想过草吗?
在最后一段,按“云”的感受来想,似乎更新奇。
- Re: 《别处》posted on 03/27/2009
小曼春风得意,草叶JULY有点蓝。我觉得不用fix什么, 幸福有时也会让人发慌的。:)
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