The Summer for Two
God of death is overcome by the first kiss,
and mistrust once inescapable between us, poises to retreat
from the height of hard feelings.
These real wounds, coupled with imagined ones, are
being tempered by your pleasing arms
to get almost healed as the days just past,
vulnerable and wide awake ---
There was the city impatient for rain season, with eyes opening aloud
and tentative breath stifled amid anxiety over air.
In vain we attempted, to pull through the hours putrefying around
our numbness, together with any surviving memories.
The hope that was being ground over and over nearly to despair,
at yet another call of chance,
edged its way to the uninviting quandary harbored in our feelings ---
Dazzling and flattering as midsummer had ever been,
it was to be eclipsed by the aloof contact between eyes,
were it not for the tears once deeply
veiled beneath your coldness,
surfaced to shower over my ever waning bed of desires.
When the city was at last flooded by ceaseless rain,
spotty glimpses reemerged to shuttle between our silences.
Still we are grateful to the scorching summer
that magically brought back the strayed fate to our doorsteps.
Year after year there is always unsettledness that originates from
the rather mysterious genesis of all longings,
that once have you rest on my weary knee
and fetch just a small raindrop,
then it flashes back every ember of melancholy, in me.
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