Re: 鎽樿瘧鍑犻椴佺背鐨勫洓琛岃瘲

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Re: 鎽樿瘧鍑犻椴佺背鐨勫洓琛岃瘲 | Oct 27 2007

琦儿 wrote:
不太喜欢第10， 14 和16首。可不可以换掉？它们有嫌不够“爱情”。
第19首有点看不准它的本意，也可以考虑换掉？
但是换之前，我有一点小建议。不知你看可不可以这样翻译：
19，你是一片树叶

Good taste! :-)

Verse 20 is not quite appropriate either.

You did a good job here translating verse 19. I think it tells a story: A rich man meets a woman who is taking water home. He wants her but she is not interested in him. He breaks her water jar and offers 100 precious stones or a hundred seas in order to compensate for her loss, but she still is not interested.