- 琦儿 wrote:
再试试改动这一首吗？
我总觉得，这里的SOUR不是酸楚，而是类似MEAN，刻薄的意思。
想了想，你说得很有几分道理。大概可以改作这样：
18，她对我似乎有些刻薄
The face she shows me is a little sour,
Though sugar has never tasted sweeter.
Sugar would be bored by its own sweetness
If it ever came to know that sour flavor.
她对我似乎有些刻薄，
我看她却比蔗糖还甘甜。
一旦品尝过酸苦的滋味，
蔗糖就变得平平淡淡。
鍏崄涓�瀛�