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- [RE:] ÖйúÏ·¾çȱµãɶ(ʯÑÒ)Posted by xw on 04/21/2005. adagio commented 2 times.
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- Posted by Susan on 04/16/2005. adagio commented 2 times.I like the first two paragraphs, you seem to have an unusual ability to paint a detailed, vivid picture with emotions underneath. Then from there the poem goes more like a prose-style story with questions asked and lessons (?) preached. If you can cut the later paragraphs into a couple shorter and more intense ones with a less-obvious preaching tone, this poem can be a quite successful one. Only some of my feelings, can be totally wrong.
- No Susan, I never had any literary training, I studied Economics in college and went to B-school here in the States. All rather dreadful trainings. :) I wonder what my highschool English teacher would think if he knew I am writing poetry in English now ... Expecting your Spring poem (Just finished everything at work, oh, what a great feeling to be free at last!)
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- Posted by xw on 04/13/2005. adagio commented 4 times.
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- Posted by xw on 04/12/2005. adagio commented once.
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- An Shan, I can tell from this piece your language is getting more mature but you have to know how to tell a story - to cut the unnecessary stuff and only to keep the essential, to make the story more condensed and more dramatic, thus it can stand out in readers' mind more clearly. Also, the last sentence isn't clear - are you wishing the way you treated JoAnne had been different or the things happened to her had been different?
- [RE:] Looking for a nice girlPosted by Achinese on 04/09/2005. adagio commented once.
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- [RE:] ENNEAGRAPHPosted by xw on 04/07/2005. adagio commented once.Wrong title. Enneagram. but maybe the graph is called enneagraph. :) I have studied Enneagram a bit, very interesting and helpful for the sake of so-called self-discovery. Though I am not sure how it has anything to do with Buddhism and Kant and Existentialism, that paper seems interesting. I will print it out and read it over in the weekend. bon weekend comrades
- [RE:] Ò»¸ñÒ»¸ñ½µÈ˲Å(ÕÅÓ¢)Posted by xw on 04/07/2005. adagio commented once.
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